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Novel Writing

Thu Oct 1, 2009, 7:51 AM
So hi guys this is actually my first journal entry :o
Really don't know what to do with this so I was helping you could give me a hand...

So I've started writing a story just for the writing experience and I've hit a little snag in the process.
I've got a good introduction, very unique in my opinion, and it develops a plot very early in the story. The main reason for this being i took it from a short story exam i did at my school. The problem being, I want to stretch an introduction for the protaganist over a whole chapter so i can get alot of information into it, and focus on him being the main character. However, I dont want to just throw away the current introduction as it is.

So here's where you can help me out :D
I need your opinions on what I should do. Should i just start from scratch? Or cut my story up and reorganise it? Or something completely different alltogether?

Any and all advice is welcome :D

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